Teen and young adult book reader audience targeting

This is a 1 option poll with 50 respondents targeting Teen and young adult book reader (Yes). A sample of responses:

• I like Magical Day. Flying with a unicorn would sound better, why not add "with" or"a"? The words unicorn and magical imply there is more fun in the book, rather than learning.
• Flying with Unicorn sounds like the most fun out of the lot. The rest sound like educational books, while the one I picked hides that fact a bit while not telling me exactly what it is.
• I would prefer "Flying with Unicorn" because it sounds more exciting. The titles that include "learning" in them would make me feel as though they would be less interesting.
• Yes, definitely flying with a unicorn. I love the name of that one.
• Magical day, it sounds nice and it is more interesting than other titles. it just has a feel good title.

This is a 2 option poll with 50 respondents targeting Teen and young adult book reader (Yes). A sample of responses:

• The description is shorter and has more of a hook. From the first couple of sentences it made it clear that the book is a fantasy told from the viewpoint of a wolf living in her pack. Option B reads more like a non-fiction documentary book for the first half of the description, and is far more dry. Option A makes things sound more interesting, and a bit more urgent, highlighting the danger and stress that Shadow is dealing with as she tries to navigate leading her pack. It makes the book sound more like an interesting read.
• B seemed better constructed, written, and descriptive. I read it as more interesting.
• The paragraph breaks made the description easier to read. I found myself skimming less can I did with the other description.
• B instantly tells you that the story is about a wolf, and gives more details than A. I would be drawn in by B!
• A - though clearly both are describing the same novel, this is just a more exciting description. It hooks with a better first line, and makes more of the character of Shadow.

This is a 2 option poll with 50 respondents targeting Teen and young adult book reader (Yes). A sample of responses:

• I chose option A because the story is more clear. The concept is not hard to understand but it has been done before and something needs to set it apart.
• The description here makes the book seem much more interesting and exciting.
• Shorter is better.
• They're basically the same synopsis, but B is more succinct. The words and the phrasing are a little more careful and compact, which helps it to communicate its point better. As Strunk & White say, omit needless words.
• Although option B is more to the point and has more directed questions, it does not have the thrill and emotion of option A. I chose this option because I was truly enveloped in the story, whereas in option B the story felt rushed and not thoroughly explained.

This is a 4 option poll with 50 respondents targeting Teen and young adult book reader (Yes). A sample of responses:

• most intruiging
• Precarious dreams sounds the most intriguing. Sweet Dreams and Lucid Nightmare's doesn't really make me think of fairies but is still very intriguing as well. Patchwork dreams sounds a bit odd but still includes the concept of dreams. Spin has no ties to the concept.
• Option D I thought had the most intriguing title. Option A was good too but a bit less impactful or intriguing. Option C I ranked third because it felt a bit too long in comparison to option d and a.Option B didn't really fit with the book's description as well which is why I ranked it last.
• It is probably a tie for Option D and A for me because I think both of those fit the description better. Option C is a little long of a title and Option B is very odd and has nothing to do with the description.
• choice d is the best to me. it makes the most sense to go with the story. b is the worst becuase i do not get what that has to do with sleeping beauty.

This is a 2 option poll with 100 respondents targeting Teen and young adult book reader (Yes). A sample of responses:

• What does this have to do with Sleeping Beauty? I like Precarious Dreams because I like words. The general public will like Patchwork because you can sell that word.
• Precarious is interesting. The high vocabulary makes me think it is well written.
• The title that is best for a reimagining of Sleeping Beauty, between these two options is choice A, Precarious Dreams. It matches better with the tale of the fairy's sleeping curse that threatens everything the main character Indigo has worked to build. The precarious word in the title matches with when she sets out on an epic adventure and uses her talent for barter to save the day and earn her own happy ending, since that could be a very precarious adventure to go on.
• The title of A sounds more like something referencing sleeping beauty. Title B sounds like a story about a person going in and out of dreams. Title A is more of one long dream that comes with dangers throughout the dream.
• I'm not fond of either but I've seen Patchwork in too many titles so I went with the more unique title of Precarious Dreams.